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Good And Plenty

I love my choo choo Charlie,
he drive a train each night
he gives me such a treat,
when he comes home at night.

I just can't get enough,
he makes me beg for more,
each time he gives me some,
it's better then before,

I need some in the morning,
he gives me some for lunch,
what a treat after dinner,
that's when I get a bunch.

It always seems so good,
and plentiful from you,
it's pink and white candy,
with a licorice center too.

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For you people around the world Good and Plenty is a candy and choo choo charlie was in the old commercial
Written September 19th, 2004

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  • slick99
    August 28
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    very nice job. you write great poems... hope to hear more of the same... -slick99

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 25, 2004
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    Actually I like chocolate covered raisins. You had to see the commercial back in the late 50's to understand this poem. Choo choo charlie was a cartoon character who advertised good and plenty candy. It popped into my head one day. My mind is a big memory bank. In the cartoon he drove a train.Don't know why I'm explaining. Your probably thinking , who cares. I appreciate the commentTake care, Sandy
    Edited on Sep 25, 11:05 p.m. because ''.

  • ColinSJones
    September 25, 2004
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    do u have a sweetooth..u have a sweet nature anyway

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 19, 2004
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    Thank for taking the tme to read my poem and comment on it. I appreciate it.Take care, Sandy
  • Michael 54
    September 19, 2004
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    Very good.

    Good and Plenty ! Cute. I like this one.
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