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bueaty of the world

green meadows
filled with visions of color
lit by warmth of sun light
penetrating and removing
shadows cast by unseen hands
breezes that caress
my body and soul
every sensation in me
exaggerated to the point
i can not stand
every breath i take in
fills me with wonder and astonishment
i stand in awe
not just at being alive
but also in this world
in which i live
waters and skies
so blue and true
mirror reflections of
the others exquisite beauty
they stand for all time
to remind us
as things get dark around us
that there is still
good in the world
and brighter days are coming

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Written September 19th, 2004

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  • Sherry gold member
    December 12, 2004
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    Ps this is also comforting and hopeful...

  • Sherry gold member
    December 12, 2004
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    Lovely

    Lovely read captures the spirit due to the beauty as you tell yet it makes it all being so remarkable. Due to the wonderment and being drawn in at once. I use the word breath taking but its more like just overwhelming (in a good way) of all the comfort thats found at once.....(Check) your world bueaty---> its beauty Sherry
    Edited on Dec 12, 7:14 p.m. because ''.