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Distant

Im getting more distant
from all of my friends
It isnt my fault
yet I can not stop myself
from fading

Its a futile hope
to reside in the past
yet its what keeps me
from insanity

No longer am I able
to converse with the world
I live as a shadow
slipping silently
from reality

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hmm. i've finally found my place in society, outside of the circle.
the last place that i can finally feel free from the constraints of everyday living disappear as i leave the grand illusion.
its a pity really. having to maintain this pathetic, invisible existance.
but i really dont care anymore.
Written September 13th, 2004

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  • October 2, 2004
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    Wow, This was amazing. The raw emotion just like stabbed you in the chest, you could almost feel the way you felt..its insane. I love it! Especially how you ended it, it was just--so wow. "Slipping silently, from reality". I love those lines. Great job here! Also, awesome name on the site...really neat.. What does it mean?

    Later Days<3
    -Ame Shizuku-