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Summer Wonders

SUMMER WONDERS

In summer bees are making honey,
colorful flowers are in full bloom.
In evening crickets are chirping,
robins are singing their tunes.

Sunshine's warmth helps life grow,
rain showers fall from clouds above.
Blue skies full of nature's beauty,
Mother Nature is sharing her love.

Sounds of summer bring a smile,
see young children laugh and play.
The silence of a clear summer sky,
rooster at the dawn of a new day.

Sweet fragrance from honeysuckle,
the allure of red roses on the vine.
Morning glories stretch to the sky,
flowers picked for a friend of mine.

Sound of thunder rolls in distance,
loud crack of the lightning streak.
Leaves rustle in the balmy breeze,
these the summer wonders I seek.







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Written September 17th, 2004

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  • Candy6
    July 12, 2007
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    It is beautiful! A great write. I love summer. A great rhymed.


  • holly9
    July 11, 2007
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    Very beautiful poem! I love summertime.


  • CountryCousin
    October 17, 2005
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    Beautiful poem.

    I always find your writes to be so lovely and a breath of fresh air just when I need it. Have to be strong tonight cousin just lost her husband.


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 1, 2004
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    Thank you for commenting on my poem and thank you for pointing out the typo in my title. I do apreciate it. Take care, Sandy


  • g r e y i s m
    December 1, 2004
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    this is a nice poem but I think you forgot to put the r on the end of summer in the title

    thank you for entering

    best wishes

    ~O


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 28, 2004
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    Thanks for the lovely comment. I guess the weather is a little different over there. Now were in fall but it;s been almost 80 all week. Take care, Sandy


  • ColinSJones
    September 27, 2004
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    u paint a very pretty/idyllic picture here of a summer's day. unfortunately we cannot depend on the weather in Scotland. In the UK morning glory is something a man wakes up with,hahaha. ilike the way u put sound and silence in the third stanza. a beautiful antidoteto all the angst that is out there - peace.


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 18, 2004
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    I wish it were a more peaceful world. If only more people would accept Our Lord and Savior it would be. Thank you for the nice comment. You take care now, Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 18, 2004
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    I usually make my poems more powerful but I was in a tranquil mood and put a softer touch to this one. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem It is always appreciated. Take care, Sandy


  • luckynsincere
    September 18, 2004
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    OHHHH!!! For and instance you made the world seem perfectly at peace....What a beautiful truely beautiful poem....
    Melanie


  • September 17, 2004
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    Great

    This is really good. Very tranquil, much different than the moods of the poetry I'm used to both reading and writing. But, I do like this. Good work.

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