All around me shadows gather
My dread grows as the Dark One's
Touch falls against my naked soul
It severs me and my blood drips
To the cold uncaring tombstone
In agony I flee
While oblivion follows
Now alone my essence falls
Upon my cold eyes
Death!
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Written July 3rd, 2002
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this one gave me slight chills as i read it. as always you are such a wonderful writer. all the best of luck to you..
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I am having a dejavue~ I am getting more hairs raised on my neck~ But it feels good
~ Awesome piece and I tell you that dark one is a....bleep....bleep....~You have a way with words~ Keep it coming and so look forward to more~Big hugs 
and much love~Desire
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that is really interesting, i like darker poetry and that is a really good piece...
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well, i'm gonna try and comment on this one sweetie!
LOL... if the site will let me that is...
i like this piece... though it's kinda dark...
sometimes too, i wish for oblivion....
just send the dark one away!
blessed be
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Lovely death. -Brandon -
don't touch it!
Very good imagery! I love this poem. And I have a question. Did you draw the picture above? I absolutely luv it. -
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Beautifully written!! -
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Images you provoked are scary indeed. Brillant write though.
HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY. -
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You have caressed the darkness well in this Susan.
Andrew -
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I shine the light of knowlege
The heat it breaks the spell
And reincarnated...she becomes
She rises up from hell
For the gift of friendship
I throw upon the grave
And knowing now there's one who cares
Atlast she now is saved
*smile*
Hugs...Eddy
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