Quickly I began to step there
To the place inside your head
Fumbling around for what to say
I guess I'll just kiss you instead
So come take flight with me baby
And lose hold of all reality
Raging forever in our hearts
Seeing the man I want to be
No one knows my heart
And where its been or will be
Cuz they can't see that first morning look
Sharing it as lovers setting us free
Now life won't always hold you up
Sometimes it breaks-letting you fall
Know that I'm always going to be here
Carrying you over and above it all
And that's just the way it is
When hearts are soaring to the sky
There are those who will see us dance
And wonder how we got so high
No one knows me
Like the woman there for the tears
Cuz they can't see the hand brushing them away
Taking away all my fears
Now the sun has risen
And your eyes will open anytime
My future smiles, gazing
To touch those soft lips with mine
No one knows our love
And the strength that it holds inside
Cuz they can't touch us in our world
In our place of love we hide
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Written September 17th, 2004
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Your rhyming was great! The only one I thought a big weird was "reality" and "be" but there are so many different accents I'm not worried about it. This was a sweet perspective on love! I like the way you take into account that it doesn't matter what anyone thinks, because like you said, "Cuz they can't see the hand brushing them away/Taking away all my fears". That strikes particularly close because some friends of the guy I'm dating right now don't really like me. They saw one fight we got in and made judgement - but if they could only ALWAYS see us (scary thought) but then they'd understand. Nice poem, I really enjoyed reading it! thanks for entering my contest!
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