When I see your smiling face,
I can't help smiling back.
When I hear your sweet, shy laugh,
I can't help laughing back.
When I look deep in your eyes,
I can't help getting lost forever.
When I feel you close to me,
I can't help moving a little closer.
When I see you softly crying,
I hold you tight. Everything's alright.
When I'm with you, time stands still.
Every moment being made for us.
When we're apart, I still see you.
I close my eyes, and there you are.
Here you are. Here I am.
Here we are, Together...
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Once again, something I just put together fairly quick, though I've been going over little parts in my head all night. Here's what I came up with.
Written September 16th, 2004
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aaaaugh! you're so cute
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SWEET! They're romantical! Woohoo!
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oh they're totally romantical! and what a great word! hah! i love it.
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Thanks I like writing cute poems like these. It's just fun trying to be romantical. I hope it's working.
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love it! :)
awww! this is the cutest poem you're good at writing ones like this.
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Thanks
It just came to me one day. ..I wish I had the feelings again that this poem is about. ..Oh well. They'll be back.
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beautiful, this poem made me feel it, really, feel what was going on.. which is the whole point of a poem.. i only wish i had it..=/ ne way.. it was good, i luved it
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yay, my brother is awesome.
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Hehe. Thanks. I don't know why I wrote this one... but I like it anyways.
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This one, like all of the other ones, is really good. You really have gotten this writing poetry thing down to a point. I am a little jealous. But I hope expressing yourself this way makes you feel better. If not, I at least hope you enjoy it
Anyway, about the poem... The repition you used was awesome, and all of the words. It flows so nicely...
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