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Images of lifetimes past
haunt my sight
My memories altered
flashing before me

Things seen are
unknown to me
Collections from
long past

Imprisoned in isolation
alone and discarded
Tearing flesh
eases tears

Highs reached as
you drip from me
Crimson stains
remind me of my addictions

Wanting freedom
from your tyranny
Unable to release
clinging to my chains

Bonds that keep me
also set me free
Never bound by others
only to self

Friendships founded
in pain and tears
Continued renewal
of lives

Trust me
as I do you
Together we'll reach the end
surviving death again

Author notes

Written for a friend of mine.
Written September 16th, 2004

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  • Seven Kinky
    June 1, 2007
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    Taking a stroll down memory lane. I love this...and you.


  • ForgotenSadness
    September 17, 2004
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    You are very welcome dear, I couldnt let you think you were all alone in this. I knew what you were going through and thought I could help a little. Even though we only pass comments on each others work, I still call you my friend.

  • Seven Kinky
    September 17, 2004
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    Sniffle That was awesome. Your words usage was so....right. I don't even know how to describe it. You conveyed so much emotion thru this and that last stanza really got me. I'm crying right now!! I feel so loved! Thank you sooooooooo much!


  • vampira1665 silver member
    September 16, 2004
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    Wow, that was intense.
    Trust me
    as I do you
    Together we'll reach the end
    surviving death again

    I do trust and I know for a factdeath will not be the end. I have already decided what happens after death. I shall have to share that with you. BTW, even if you are at the end of time you can decide that you still want to come back again. I have made my decision and what it will involve. Excellent piece.

    Hugs and bites, Lady Raven