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Mourning of Dreams and Reality

mourning hours of the day
the angel of agony descends
taking the love in our lives away

grief and lonliness fill the air
the river of hatred consumes the world
the selfish, heartless and concieted don't even care

trying to get by in a world so dead
just like going upstream without a paddle
the hungry will forever yearn for a piece of bread

our dreams are what keep us alive
it's reality that kills us
we're left constantly struggling to survive

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Written September 16th, 2004

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  • Dishy
    September 18, 2004
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    I liked this and it does seem that way reality being the killer .Well done