remember those days
where evenings touched
into morning
and we found each other arm in arm
passing that loneliness
with smiles
found in our eyes
tasting what we need
piercing embraces
stirring emotion
moment by moment
finding heaven
within a kiss
seeking what matters
within our hearts
if only for a day
but then always
seeking more.
Sept. 16, 2004
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Written September 16th, 2004
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Is this an extra marital affair I sense here? Very well written and full of love I sense.
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This is such a tender appraisal of love. I appreciate the fact that this is about more than just touching, but the growing together of two people who care about each other. And it is beautifully penned.
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finding heaven within a kiss
you have many exquisite lines here and the image...WOW!!! This is amazing work here. I can hardly wait to delve deeper into your work. Excellent.
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GOOD GOD!!!!!!!! The talent!!! WOW!!!!! I m so very jealous!! Holy cow!! I felt emotions stirr!! You are brillient!! this is wonderfuL! Thank you for IMing me!!! WOW! -
i liked it!
I was drawn into this by the great name. Good poem. You are very intelligent with your words. -
Such a sensitive write, your imagery is so easy to follow and to visualise.
A beautiful poem.
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WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!! THIs has to be the best love poem i have ever ready! OMg...i love it! Your such a great writer!! Keep it up! Comment back!
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a true work of art
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"Finding heaven within a kiss" This line made me sigh. I have been so content being on my own, not feeling the need for anyone, and now after reading this, I have changed my mind. I miss those tender moments you have so vividy portrayed here. sigh
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Dude, I really like this poem! Mostly because it's so true! Human beings are always, always, ALWAYS seeking more. Whether it be in love, gain, fame... I love it. It's very simple, but I feel that you put so much into it. Nice one.
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this tells a story of how love is splendid and we seek more of it to never be contained in enough of itself
Tamara
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gently sweet, i love the softness of the emotions in this, the poem and the picture go beautifully together. i absolutely love these lines
'finding heaven
within a kiss'
they are just truly beautiful
keep up the great work and thanks for sharing
s Shanelle
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I don't think it was supposed to, but this made me cry. My pain is too raw for me to smile at my memories & this certainly brought some to mind. Thanks for sharing & I apologise for my lame comment. La x
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It's poems like this...... that make me love... love poems!
So beatiful! Great work!
DanielleMarie
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Being in love for a few years
Then being hated forever
It's worth it.
I loved this poem so much, and the picture really suites it too. Great write side, great write.
~Bishonenkoi
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you write with such incredable softness, it is truly amazing. I think I will be reading more of your works to come. Well done
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(sighs) Wow! You write some of the most amazing love poems. Your words display an incredible depth that most men don't reach. I think you are an alien from another planet! Just kidding. This is vey beautiful and you should be quite proud of your ability to touch the heart of a woman. You are impossible to read without taking a deep breath as one reaches the climax of your words. EXCELLENT writing!
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oh wow. this touched me deep. ^_^ It made me yearn for such evenings that melted into morning, and sleepness nights, me with someone who would hold me tight and lovingly.
I liked this poem,
and it was beautifully
written... vry touching
Trish -
Wonderful.
I have no words for this piece. Its a great piece of work, Bill! Good job. -
Too much of a good thing, is a good thing!! Should be a song, huh?
Great poem. Lots of tenderness and emotion, but leaves the reader on their own....thinking of their own thoughts. Good stuff! Cheryl
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totally sweet.. i love the image you included with this poem as well sent out the emotion very well. thanks so much for shring kep up the great work ~ Lf
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squeeks slightly oh wow... I am... wow... this is something I could only dream of... this is absolutely beautiful Bill... totally beautiful
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Excellent! A pleasure to read!
Can never get enough of a good thing, Bill. Beautiful thoughts and feelings in this poem and I love the atmosphere created by the pic'.
<3 Maureen
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awwww, wow! This was beautiful side... wow... i loved it. it was so pretty. and the picture just compliments is so nicely! this was awesome. youre awesome. i'm awesome. we're all freakin awesome!! hehe
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sigh I wanna be in love...
This is so true. A lot of times people tell themselves 'only if he would just..' ,'i only want five minutes..' That is never the case. We get a taste for what we want and inevitably want more of it. I've played this game with myself quite a bit. Paints a pretty picture, still, sadness hints at me. -
This is an amazing piece, Bill. It so accurately and warmly describes that time in a love where the affection,beyond the physical, occupies every moment. Not many people get to know this. Lucky are those who do.
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