engaged in suicide that is what i strive
I planned on this so long, soon I won't be alive
I sit in the dark corner, and pull it out
I'm looking in the future, i can see my mother shout
But i don't seem to care, its taken over my brain
I put the razor to my pale skin, and cut away the pain
I bleed a fountain of red, dripping from my wrist
I've got this razor close to me, i hold it in a fist
I soon begin to drift, my body feels so numb
No one cared anyways, death here i come
I close my eyes I dream of happiness I never had
I'm sorry to all my friends I'm sorry mom and dad.....
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Written September 14th, 2004
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This poem I happy is just that a poem because it is
so decriptive that I would hate for anyone to think
like that or comtoplate such a hartless act upon there
self. I know it exist but I just don't like knowing that
this can happen . -
wow this is amazing i love the imamgary and the line But i don't seem to care, its taken over my brain
I put the razor to my pale skin, and cut away the pain
is totally amazing -
gret
i feel like that often and this poem is a great expression of that emotion. good jod -
very well written, a true expression of deepest pain. well i hope and pray you don't act on this becuase that would be an absolute tradgedy, you do have a life to live and you are a beautiful person no matter what anyone tells you becuase the value god has placed on you is worth more than gold. instead of giving in to the fear and pain, why not place your hope and trust in god. he is near the brokenhearted. i kid you not, it's the only way i survived. i will pray for you.
Edited on Sep 14, 9:12 p.m. because ''. -
haha...oh wow i'm stupid. i thought u commented and applauded your own poem cuz it said "hidden..." hahaha wow. tamera's offically gone. cough cough anyways...great write and DON "T U EVER IN UR LIFE THINK ABOUT ACTING ON THIS!! OR I WILL GO TOOOOO!! (like that matters cough cough)
Edited on Sep 14, 6:51 p.m. because 'I WANTED TO! THATS WHY!'. -
wow, that was touching!
very good! Keep up the good work! 
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