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let me be your light

It makes me cry to think of your hurt
I wan't to suck it dry and absorb your pain
I would do it in a heartbeat, a blink
Please understand, how much you mean to me
And how it hurts me to see you like this
I love you for you, why don't you?
In my eyes your perfect, but in yours...your...
I don't understand, how you can see nothing
when i look and see so much
I love you, let me be your light
Let me save you, let me catch you when you jump,
because i love you too much, to let you fall, come dear, fly away with me and you will see the light

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Written September 14th, 2004

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  • irishpoet16
    September 26, 2005
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    i love this one its sad sweet and lovely