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Waiting for you...

You,

Were all I wanted.

You,

Were everything I needed.

You,

Were always in my dreams.

You,

Were,

My,

Everything.

I,

Always kept you close.

I,

Was always there when you needed me.

I,

Was everything YOU wanted.

I,

Was,

YOUR,

Everything.

As,

I walked through the streets at night,

Thinking,

About the times you and me shared.

Remembering,

At the corner of that street,

Was where we said "I love You".

Passing,

Under the tree where we had our first Kiss.

Smelling,

The sweet essence of you in the air.

Wishing,

To hold you close to me.

Wanting,

To have you say "I love You" again,

Knowing,

Things won't go back to the way they were.

Walking,

Into this empty place in my heart,

And,

Wiping away my tears,

Talking,

To the old person I knew so well,

Now,

Alien to me.

Griping,

My pillow tight,

Putting,

My thoughts aside,

I,

Fall into a slumber,

That only can be broken,

With one of our kisses,

'Please,

Rescue me,' I plead,

As,

I sneak into your dreams,

Hoping,

You will one day,

I,

Know that things won't go back,

To the way it was before.

But,

Always know,

That I will love you,

Now,

Until,

Forever,

More...

Author notes

Sorri about the whole spacing and everything. If you all want, I'll change it.
Written September 13th, 2004

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  • crying in shame
    September 21, 2004
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    i really like this poem!! it shows a hell of a lot of emotion and i like the spacing it is good...keep it up!!!
    later days