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~My Adopted Poet~

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To often in poetry people get lost, we're searching for meaning

amid all the loss.
Time and again people pass by, no hello, no smile
and no one asks why.
Friendship may develop if you are lucky enough,
but random acts of kindness sometimes come from above.
I was asked to help out, lend them some time, and met a
young girl, who spoke out in rhyme.

Her words filled with flair, heart on her sleeve,
I know this was the poet I was sent just for me.

To watch over and guide her among the flowers and clover

I have read her works over and over.
A kind one she is who believes in dreams,

the power to love people falls out of her seams.
Welcome to my Adopted Poet Fantasy08,
my new Friend on AP...

Author notes

Meag here ya go sweets, Thank You for being such a sweet Girl, Be Safe and Take Care, Cat
Written September 13th, 2004

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    November 15, 2004
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    This is so sweet!!!


  • Whispering Winds
    September 14, 2004
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    This is such a wonderful poem.
    It is wonderful meeting new friends, even if it is over the internet, i dont care what my husband says. You can never have too many.
    I am happy that you two have found eachother, now the two of you will have a wonderful friend ship...just wait and see.
    Take care Cat.
    Tammy


  • macandrew
    September 14, 2004
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    well writ

    Now I will have to go take a browse at her work. Thought the line:

    I know this was the poet I was sent just for me

    needs a bit of tidying. Perhaps

    I know this was the poet, sent just for me

    or

    I know this was the poet I was sent, just for me

    Anyways, well met.
    John


  • MagicLady silver member
    September 14, 2004
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    I need to be adopted too. I had my name on the list to adopt someone....but I really think I need the mentor. I need to be taught to write properly. This lucky young gal, who got you for a mentor. Good luck to you both.

    Cheryl


  • hugh wyles silver member
    September 14, 2004
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    Dear Cat and Fantasy 08,
    Congratulations to you both. To Cat for getting a poetess for a daughter and to Fantasy 08 for getting such a sensitive, intelligent, caring and loving mother. May you both have a long and happy relationship together.
    And Fantasy, remember that any friend of Cat's is a friend of mine. Love and hugs to you both and applause for a touching announcement by my dear friend Cat. XXX Hugh.
    Edited on Sep 14, 3:15 because 'typo error'.


  • Fantasy08
    September 13, 2004
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    Wow Cat this was awesome!! I am sooo touched!! You really couldn't have written a better poem!! I have never had something so beautiful ever written about me!! You are an awesome mommy hahaha!! I wish I could applaud this a million times haha!! Thank you soo much!! You are such a wonderful woman!!!

    xoxo~Meag


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 13, 2004
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    Awww... I wanna be adopted! I want a sugar daddy! Do ya think you can hook me up chika? JUST TEASING! (maybe )This is such a sweet write for Fantasy. You are such a sweetie. She couldn't be in better hands!

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