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-Jen-

used to smile like i meant it
because i believed you would always be there
we would dance when every body was watching
you loved to make them stare
i could sit and not utter a word
and everything not said you understood

we parted ways
pretending not to care
said it was for the best
if we never remembered the time we shared

but i cant
i still love you
i cry when i'm alone
why cant you still be here
for now i open my eyes
praying you be standing here
and i sit by the phone
scared to call
but all i need is your voice
i haven't slept since you left,
your side feels dead and empty

it is said easier than done
i still love you
and i know you still care

Author notes

i know its realy bad trasistions and stuff didn't realy work, it started as a letter, and each section was written seperatly and ended up being thrown together. didn't realy work all to well, but it could be a lot wrse i guess
Written September 12th, 2004

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