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i cant take it anymore...

im so sick of your voice
your yelling, scremaing voice
that you throw at me everyday
that just eats my my soul
you just dont understand
how much pain it causes me
telling me that im not good enough for you...
maybe you should take a day
in my shoes
see how it compares to your empty life
at least i wake up to a new day
not just sleep it all away
and expect all of my problems to go away
at least i work and educate myself
not just do nothing and expect
everyone to do everything for me...
no
i dont complain about myself
because i screwed my life up
like you do
i dont even blame it on you
even though my problems are your fault...
i just learn to live
but ill never understand
how i still love u as much as i do.

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Written September 12th, 2004

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  • SusanL
    September 13, 2004
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    Sounds like life has taken a grip again....
    sorry to hear that, for a whle there I thought all was well for you. I am still here if you ever want to talk...

  • Momentaryhappiness
    September 13, 2004
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    This is a good poem, and I agree with juicy juice, alot of people can relate.
    Well done, you captured and portrayd your feelings really well.


  • anna3
    September 13, 2004
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    great

    It's very sad but understandable such a anger, great captured feelings I hope You will feel better soon. Good luck in everything You do anna


  • juliannex0
    September 13, 2004
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    lol this is a good poem and alot of people can relate good job