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My Knight

My Knight
by Whyagain

your eloquence deceives me.
your pompous air
your strut
your sound
your words that pierce deeper than your sword.

you turn me; your dualism mirrors mine
and i only understand
that i can't make it go my way.

so strike me down.
let my hair fall mercilessly around you.
strike me with your shining sword,
my Knight
and i will accept it all without question.

whyagain
12 september 2004
edited 15 january 2005

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Random piece. Just for fun! Feedback is always appreciated.
-WhyA
Written September 12th, 2004

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