I know the dead girl
And I don't care that she's gone.
You get what you give.
Author notes
She's dead. Get over it; she was a whore.
Written September 12th, 2004
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Wow. Extremely powerful, amazing piece. That's what I love about haiku, so short yet so strong. Superb!
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what did you say...? Unless you were some idiot on the philosophy board shoving Chrisitianity down our throat....
Yeah, she was horrible. She was 14 and she was in a car with this 21-year-old guy who was her boyfriend. He was drunk.
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Fantastic!
Wow! Strong write, really powerful, I really liked the emotion you displayed in this piece, but was the girl really that mean? It probably isn't very respectful to be angry with her when she's dead...anyways I really loved this piece, please don't take offense to what I said earlier, I really try to be nice to everyone, so if you understand my point, I didn't even know her. I really enjoyed this piece, keep up the good work!!!
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Purplerose
(isn't sad how the rose doesn't come out purple 
)
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U hella like this poem. I was right to the point and even though it was short it was powerful.Good job.
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Excellent
Great writing is fearless and sez whatever the hell the writer wants to say...like this short powerful poem. Well done! -
wow really good write keep up the good work....................................................................
...........................BONNIE
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