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i am ( writtin in the view of the north twin tower)

i am the north twin tower
i watched as my brother fell
i heard the cries of the dying
i killed some of the dead
i brought sadness confusion and devastation into this world
along with hatred
i took friends and family and swallowed them
without a second thought
i heard the sirens and felt the pain
i cant take back what Ive done
and you wont forget it
look at my face and see the devastation Ive been through
can you forgive the one who has done you so much wrong
i am the North twin tower

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Written September 11th, 2004

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  • Talia
    September 17, 2004
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    Self blame, so sad especially when it wasn't the tower it was the plane and terrorists that weakend it... One blow can bring anything down and cause devistation. A good perspective.

    Natalia