Mysteries unfold, as with
extreme care; Firstly, the
tissues of awareness, creep
to the surface, with trepidation.
The second arrival, is vocabulary;
jumbled, disjointed, exaggerated;
Swaggers boldly, drunkenly, proclaiming
their worth; Sentences, begin to
emerge; Topics, filter through the
many faucets of the imagination.
Choosing, segregates fact from
fiction; As a judge wielding power;
Paragraphs, assemble with neatness,
words of sensibility and worth,
into workable phrases; Statements
allowing the imagination free reign,
into a flight of fancy, or fantasy;
Accumulating, into a work of art;
A masterpiece, or a disastrous
failure; Disappointment, or elation
guides the pen, by it's own merit;
Determination, to create, it's only
motive.
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My Muse
Written September 11th, 2004
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Thank you. I am guilty of writing as I speak to a large extent, often garbled, failing to catch my breath in the right places . I shall work on this and many thanks for pointing this out, I do appreciate it
Side note: You are most welcome
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As with the last poem of yours I commented on, this one bothered me with line breaks, but that's also it's only problem. It's made up for with good wording and overall flow, and I actually liked the ending, even though it's a one word line, which I usually hate. Keep writing.
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Thank you I think it stems from being a small child, I always had my nose where it shouldnt have been and definatly had an over active imagination
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I like the title of this piece 'Pandora's Box' and the contents within it, hehe. A very creative piece, I particularly liked the line; 'Disappointment, or elation
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Many thanks for returning the favour, it is appreciated Your kind words also lend support
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Nicely worded and kept together, you placed me in a gallery of words and images that I could not escape from it marveled me and kept me interested to divine what the meaning was in all of this that I have read.
I felt many creatures of thought crawling into me from this work and would like to thank you for stopping by and commenting on my poem "embrace". Hearing from my readers is always appreciated.
Well done. Bravo.
much love,
James
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Thank you for the Roses I am glad you enjoyed this, your comments are greatly appreciated
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Yes you are right, it is magic and mystery, the magic being the word choices and the mystery is not knowing whether it will work or not
Thank you for your comments, they were greatly appreciated
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This was fantastic! I loved this piece. . . I had to learn about Pandora's box in Language arts in seventh grade. . . I don't really remember much cause it was a while ago but anyways. (that was off the subject).
Well it was a great piece and I enjoyed reading it a lot!!! Great write. Thanks for sharing! Keep writing!!
Love
Amelia
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well, i havent been on pretty much all week until now, and the first thin g i read is yours. You get the idea here... it is very thoughtful, as well as written. It really reminds me of the things I've encountered in the past few months. The only thing i don't get is your title; It doesn't fit right in my mind for some odd reason... (Maybe its the fact that i havent really thought about stuff for the past wee, or the fact that i just got done with 8 hours of practice...) I've always thought Pandora's Box as mischief and trickery and that stuff, but im probably wrong. Great write here! keep the good stuff coming!
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Thank you Bijou I am glad you enjoyed it
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Thank you, yes it can be daunting to say the least Still a few harsh words never killed anyone so I will grit my teeth and wait Thanks for your kind words, they are appreciated
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Loved it!
The end is very powerful. I enjoyed the structure of the lines and where you capitalized--definitely affected the mood and significance of the poem. -
LOL, it's what it's all about isn't it. Trying to get it all together and hope for the best. We can never tell until it hits the page and gets reviews LOL Great piece here.
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Thank you I sometimes need to express myself in this manner, othertimes it can be quite whimsicle, depends on the mood
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You have an amazing expression through vocabulary, unusual and impressive.
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