Circles and kisses, mark
the spot, in the game of
chance; wistfully, hoping
that one didn't see,the
opening for a run to
victory and triumph.
Ducking and weaving,
all over the page; In the
hope of leaving false clues,
innuendos, but alas, a
winner emerges; 3-1 I win!
now it's your turn to make the coffee.........
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A little nothing that stemmed from a saying
Written September 11th, 2004
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awwww thats cute!!!
keep it up person 
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I am so pleased to hear that coffee is good for you because I am an addict
We dont drink tea here unless we are sick, but I do try to drink coffee in small cups Many thanks for your kind words, they really are appreciated 
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Excellent write, cutiepie! (mmm....coffee) *wipes away drool snaking down chin* haha...sorry about that! Just for anyone who wants to know, I wrote an article on coffee once, and despite all the rumors, it's really good for you! Anyways, cutiepie, I love your writing...there's so much imagery and you make the words dance because of the order that you put them in! You have so much talent; I can't say it enough! Thanx for commenting!
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Thank you I am pleased you enjoyed it
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I've never heard "noughts and crosses" maybe that's just because where I'm from...This is such a sweet write...it reminded me of when me and my Grandma used to play all the time (and she kick my butt)! Coffee is so the ultimate prize
lol excellent write
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Thank you You also have a good day
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Wonderful poem! I really liked it, it made me smiel! Great work as always... Keep it up and I hope you have an extra-wonderful day!
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Thank you, Im glad it gave you a smile
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Noughts and crosses/Tic tac toe, why it has two names, I'll never ever know Nice poem you got there, well done
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Coffee is a necessity in this house, and we all try very hard to get out of the making of it Any little trick we can find to pass the making to someone else
Thank you for your comments, they are appreciated.....as she scuttles to make the visitor a fresh cup of coffee
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craziness the other person hasto make coffee i want some i want some... lesh play !! i want my coffee made for me.. since i dont drink coffee all too often
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Yes it is funny where our thoughts come from We take inspiration from anywhere we can Thanks for your comments, they are appreciated
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LOL... I'll have my coffee with a little cream, please.
This is cute, very cute. Funny where our ideas come from, isn't it?
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Thank you and yes I agree. It started as a im and turned into a challenge The result was a cup of Coffee Many thanks for your kind words
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Lol. I would think tic-tac-toe is too long. We play rock-paper-sissors in my house. lol. I thought it was cute. The length was perfect for what you were trying to convey, which as you said, was just a simply thought. It brightended my day.
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Thanks Had fun Blue mountain if you please
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Lol mine has 3 sugars and a biccie
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Great job! Once when I was much younger and hung with poets and painters and others who would not woo fashion, each would choose a line or word or phrase and we would pen our sudden classics from whatever hit us between the eyes. You did it well, I'll make de coffee! Stu
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Throws coffee in the pot - ouch the flippin' pot is hot. Duckin' and weavin', cluckin' and breathin' - I think my head has fallen off. Tic tac ohhh toes
I have no idea about this poem but hey I am smiling anyway
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