, Yellow specks and flicks of flecks,
of shadowed soft cool dreams;
wishing wells of purple hues;
that pour in green eyed gleams;
Precious white of cotton cool;
shadow hues warm full,
streams and darkness hidden red;
murmured love seeped lull,
Yellow roses smiling bright;
wrapping full and round abound,
Dahlia whispers posed in thorns;
not a scream or shrill thorned sound,
Soft voice see saws, grey green crow caws;
that frothy waves white wash collide,
Sweet-Pea Pea pods bare feet wee wobs,
supple sand texture, soothing; each long stride,
Merry Mina wrapped in colors;
blue green hues to touch and cool your feet;
Flower petals, in seashore daydreams;
to send in warm love, complete replete.
Author notes
I know it needs work, it could never be perfect enough for my Preciousest Sweetest pea, but well twas a spur of the moment and had to drop a thought off just so my Preciousest Sweetest Pea in all the shiny seven seas had something to read and smile, and just "know" that someone had warm fuzzy wistful loving longing thoughts for her 
she is such the preciousest most purtee lovable huggable Pea, I hope your birthday and every other day for that matter has a thought of what a gift you are to this world, thank you so much Tamara for an excuse to write something mooshy sweetpea mushy to let Mina know she is so soooooooo very muches loved 
edited 13 september line 8 hue changed to lull
Written September 11th, 2004
A contest entry
- Flowers For Morrowind - Pick a Flower & give it to our beautiful lady Mina! by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended September 12, 2004, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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: Hi Joey. I got your message dated Oct.29. Yes, I am still around and go to the library here in Spokane now and then. I don't hear from Morrowind anymore. I guess Mina lost interest in me. Happy forthcoming Holiday season Joey. The Seahawks will have fun clobbering San Francisco tomorrow, huh?
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Ahhh I wouldn't take it personal my friend, she is a busy little Pea, that and her PC is always on the blink anymore. You know how it is, sometime some of us just kinda move along to find a little something else or are really preoccupied.... I am sure she thinks about you here and again, and I am sure you bring her a warm smile when she does
Like I said you are certainly good people, and that is one of those things people never forget,
God bless you and I hope your holidays turn out more joyful than you could ever imagine, and if not, well I hope you make it through in one piece and make us all smile with your outlook on them afterwards,
Sincerely,
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Hallo Joe
Just to say I miss you.
-- you with your beautiful poetry and dancing dreams.
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Well well well...what do you say about a piece of writing like that?? Brilliant!! As per usual!! Then again when have you ever written anything less than brilliant? So, are you not talking to me anymore then? I've written you a few little note which you've not replied to. I hope I havent done anything to annoy you. Any way. I better leave you to it. Take it easy. Talk to you soon
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I love this write and structure around the picture, wonderful illustration of this poem, great job and thank you for sharing this pretty piece with us..Linda
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Oh my such visions. thank you so much for your write.
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the poem complimented the picture well. there is a fun beat to it that i rarely see anymore. Good job, i hope to see more like it soon ^_^ -
Without sounding as cliched as most people who comment, I wanted to say that this had brilliant imagery to it. I thoroughly enjoyed the intricacy in the way you weaved your words together to produce an emotionally beautiful piece. Well done here!
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Magnificent
Joey for such a magnificent piece...
She is a beauty to behold and one that is so deserving of lifes' gifts...
Gorgeous flowers for an equally gorgeous poet
Thank you for sharing this write...
Look forward to reading more and miss reading your works~
Desire
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Thank you for the compliment and for the compliment on the picture as well. I wasn't aware someone promoted this lovely little piece, one of the last things I wrote, to a very lovable person. Been a bit in a hole lately, wondering if I will ever write or take any pretty pictures for that matter, but to see someone poke in out of the blue makes me smile, and every smile is a smile closer to inspiration,
Kindest regards,
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Hi, a very pretty poem with a lovely pic, one compliments the other, this write I liked very much it has a good feel and the flow is quite smooth, you put this in featured at a low 7 so I doubt if it was ever in the box on the right hand side, perhaps better to up the anti to 12 that way it will get there in the end, I just decided to have a look at all poems promoted and came accross this lovely write, all the best, hugs Di
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Hey Joey Dude how you been man? Listen, I don't know much about flowers. I might choose oleanders or something, so why don't you pretend you are John Smith and I'll pretend I am Myles Standish, and you send her some flowers for me, O.K.? How are things over in Seattle? I would move there from Spokane but I am a dumb person, and it would take me to long to find a safe low rent district. Be sure to tell Mina I am absolutely crazy about her John! O.K.? I gave you 7 points for this man, which is the number of peace!
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beatiful!!
Such an amazing breath taking piece! no word could possible give this piece justace!!!!!!!
great imagery!
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very tender
Merry Mina! How wonderful! Your soul is like the flower it so valiantly describes. Joey! Joey! Joey! -
This is a very nice write. You did a really good job on penning this. The flower is very beautiful. You gave off a lot of vivid imagery. Good luck in the contest! ♥Smoochie
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'Bare feet wee wobs', i just love it and all the colours and flowers on the page. I could almost smell them!
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smiles
Don't change anything Joe. So vivid and sincere of heart. Just so soft and supple. I wish to lay on a bed of petals and breathe clean air just listening to my own heart song. Lovely hun, as you are.
~Ange
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wow...so vivid! just gorgeous...
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awwww
i love the easy smoothness of this
and it's sweet sincere reason for writing this wonderful piece
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SIGH>>>>>>>Beautiful as always me sweet Joey! ~Laura
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very nicely done..i love your poem...the picture is soo cute..keep up the good work Joey!
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Why didn't I know about this contest for Mina?? Why did I not know about this poem you wrote for her??
Geez I do stay away much too much
I am going to tell you this Joe because I know you will take it in the high compliment it was meant. This poem almost had a Dr. Suess quality to it in your skill with the rhyme. Now mind you, this isn't silly like he gets, because this was dang pretty. It was the cleverly placed rhymes that made it that way for me.
And I KNOW you will take that in the spirit I intend it because he is one of your favs, right??
Ah, my Mina, she does inspire doesn't she?? If only I had known, I could have entered too. But of course I would have lost because of this poem right here
This is precious Joe. Amazing writing. One of your best me thinks.
~~Dawn
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Perfect In My Eyes!
Your words are like raindrops sprinkled ever so softly upon the flower to help them grow, and bloom in colors ever so beautiful.
Your writings put the art in heart, and I'm so happy to be able to call you friend!
Best wishes in all you do, and may all your dreams come true, like your heart that comes shinning through and through!
Your Bro, Timothy -
What a breathless collision of words and passion. A sponge soaking up all emotions that can possibly fit into the 26 letters of our language. Drinking in your words, I could barely breathe nor feel my legs and every SINGLE poem you write is like this. You understand? I can't get enough of it, It's like sweet lips in perky formation waiting there as you stare and floating on the air and WOW.
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really really really really pretty. i miss you joey. talk to me. come talk to me.
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Sweet, Simple, And Beautiful! VERY nice write!
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Lovely write! Definately deserving of a trophy. Beautiful picture as well. Words move me more than pictures, but bring them together and geesh--- got me blushing and feeling all lovey dovey and mushy.
Nice work. I will have to read more of your work.
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Very sweet Joe...I'm sure she'll love it...
Eddy -
ooooo-i love this! so cheerful and Sweet Pea is my fav scent. This made me smile, very uplifting to read-I needed that
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Ahh, it doesn't need that much work. Maybe adding a few commas here and there would help out with the flow. I would also suggest putting the last 4 lines together instead of separating them since you have the other stanzas like this. Other than that, this was perfect, my dear. I absolutely loved it!
Power to writing!
Dana -
great
WOW....amazing. I love the way you write and how you describe things. Keep up the great work. Love ya See ya Bye
~laura -
I love the way the words in this piece roll around on the tongue of the reading. Like a playful kitten with a ball of yarn. So beautiful and sweet.
Anna -
Truly beautiful writings.
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man...the coupling of words you use, astonishes me. I wish I could write as eloquently as thou! I need to start reading more...my vocabulary is so lax. What a precious poem for a precious girl, I'm sure!
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaw Joey~ Beautiful piece you have here and well deserving of a trophy~
Anyone can definitely feel the love from your write...
Bravo to you ............Mina is a beauty and the purtiest flower out there~
Loved this one
Had to read it a few times....Made me blush...hehe
and much love~Desire
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This is very sweet and gentle. A lovely offering for someone that you care about. Sometimes the best poems are the ones that you write in the here and now... Let them flow straight from the heart.
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Sweet and beautiful in your way: unique in simplcity and superb in emotions.
I'm sure the lady is going to be delighted.
Sarah -
YAYYYYYYYYYYY my Sweet pea now!!!!! has two trophy's
I'm so happy for my Jo Jo.. he has a Silver now to keep his Bronze trophy company!!!!!! hehe Smooochhhhhhhhh
Just like two peas in a pod
"Congratulations"
Love you Sweety
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Congrats on placing in the contest hun. This is just gorgeous, makes me jealous for someone to write something so beautiul as this for me one day LOL You do have a way with making everything beautiful. Congrats again hun. Blessings, Gypsy
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what a lovely write. I especially liked "Flower petals, in seashore daydreams;to send in warm love, complete replete"
Very impressive the way your work flows.
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Beautiful, lovely, so pretty. I'm glad I stopped by to read it
sorry I can't leave a better comment, I've got to get to a meeting.
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Lovely
What a lovely poem and such Huge flowers! Beautifully written , good luck in the contest
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Joey, don't you touch this! It's exquisite at it is. It's beyond beautiful and speaks from the heart. There are no words to do this justice, it's that perfect.
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This was beautiful Joe. I have missed seeing your works grace the pages here at AP. I am glad the first poem back packed such a wallop. Lots of
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It isn't any wonder.. why I Love my Precious Joe so much!
Oh my God Tamara! This is my Sweet Peas' Specialty
He's my little Prince of the Flowers ~ You know ??
Oh my! look at that picture ... What HUGE flowers!!
When it comes to flowers my Sweet pea' is the KING!!!
Where are YOU my Most Precious ? i can't see you pass the
petals hehe There's my mooshy lil' pea' Smmooochhhh
Oh Joe.. everything you write is so adorable, sweet dreamy
and you make me Smile so much with all that
mooshyyy pea' lingo of Ours! LOL hehe
And i'm sure the crows are wondering about us being such silly peas again...
Just love that you put some of Our favorites into this poem
The Crows & the Pea pod
You're such a gift too.. my most precious lil'Sweetheart Youuuuu
This made me SSSSSmiLLLe sooooo muchhhh.. my lil' pea' cheeks hurt!!
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Love YOUUUUU so Huggably Much ...you know ? SqqqueeeZZZe
Good thing i won't be judging
Because i'm a lil' bias "when it comes to my adorable pea" hehe
psssttt i hope it didn't show LOL 
Sending lots of fuzzy warm 'Good Luck Wishes' to my Sweetum i'm missing ~ ~ 
LUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV
XOX
Your lil' Pea' mate
byyyy the Other Sea ~
MiNA
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Awwwww Joey
This is simply stunning sweetie. Your artistic beauty really shines in this piece and I am sure that any woman who can make you write like this is definitely deserving of such a treasure.
Best of luck to you my friend...
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Ah you have the most wonderful way of describing things, that perfection is not needed.. I love the lilt in this.. it has such an uplifting 'feel' to it!.. I'm glad I stopped by and read..
Best of luck!!
~~whims
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