Pixies flutter
from bud to blossom
a glittery trail~
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Written September 11th, 2004
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Excellent
Wonderful creation. So very well expressed.
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"...a glittery trail~" What a magically gorgeous image to leave me with!! This is such a wonderful senyru, full of beautifully images packed into 3 tight lines. I wish you a cascade of pixie dust!!!
karen 
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This is a very cute... um... poem?
I'm still not sure what a Senryu is, but it seems to me a lot like a Haiku but slightly different in numbers.
I love fairies, and I think the pictures goes QUITE WELL with the Senryu!
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I could use a little pixie dust here and there... All I seem to gather is the real kind...
This was really pretty and the pic and background jsut add to it.
susan -
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this! Fairies are so cool! I cannot get enough of your work! You should get it published or something! You have talent! 
If I showed this to my English teacher, she would try to get it published! Great write!!!
~Kayla
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this was so short and sweet..yet said so much,.i really like it .. great poem.. Lisa
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Again a lovely ku! I loved the imagery you painted here. Actually, I love everything you write about fairies
Thanks for the pleasant view!
Kisses and love,
Mari
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wow... this kinda makes me think of dark purple. i like it alot ...shows a picture in your head of the pixes doing there thing..really sweet..
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Lovely write
Lovely Susan, I have recently taken on a love of fairies....and am collecting them.....Very pretty nicely done.
Sherry :
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ohhh! i like the fairy! nice choice of words.
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I love your background and photo. So well chosen. This is so well done, I really enjoyed it. It has such dramatic imagery to it. The glittery trail sums it all up. Well done.
Cheryl
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this was very short but yet, it gave my mind endless possblity of things to think about on this poem of your's. So to me this was great I love it. i think that this was a great ideal. i really enjoyed it very much . I thank you for shareing it
Edited on Sep 11, 8:30 p.m. because 'misspelled word'. -
I love this, and the background and picture, too An over all beautiful poem and presentation.
Now...get out the scotch broom, there's pixie dust everywhere
Great job, Susan. I enjoyed this very much.
love and 's
Dee
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Karen and Sis Gill
Thank you all so much for dropping by
I thought it was purdy too
Once again thanks for the views and comment much appreciated
Love ya
Susna~~~
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awwww.. so purrrddyyy.. lovely little senryu, they can say so much to.. come fly away.. just for a day
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Susan
Very enchanting, your magical words create a beautiful picture
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Karen
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Thanks so much you all
Sis and The Lost-One for the view
It is much appreciated
Hugs n love
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Fairies ans Pixies are one of my most favorite things to read about. So short, but very sweet. It explains alot in a few short lines. It made imagine little fairies dancing from flower to flower. Great job.
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Lovely!
Very pretty, Sis! Magical and mystical..the idea of fairies appeals to many, especially us poetic bards. 
Re: melphleg's comment..the third line is supposed to be a new but related thought..Well done, Sis!
Maureen
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Thank you little one
For dropping by and commenting it means a lot
Hugs
Susan~ -
Thank you Don and James for droppping by
I did the correction
Your visits mean a lot to me
Again
n love to all
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Once again in a few words you're able to create a beautiful picture in the mind's eye. Lines 1 and 2 flowed beautifully. From line 2 to line 3 wasn't as smooth perhaps because line 1 and 2 were a continued thought where as line 3 seemed to be a new but related thought.
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pixies flutter
from bud to blossom
a glittery trail
A slight edit which I think edits this image out real well. Very beautiful presentation with a wonderful image. Nice work.
Don -
A really pretty write, short, but so many little lively images expressed. And the background is beautiful, though the text is slightly light and yet it's perfect as it is. And the picture at the top graced it perfectly.
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Uncle Space
And Jeniffer
Thank you all for dropping by
I am glad you enjoyed my little fairy senyru
Again thanks
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Oh, Susan.. I am glad you invited me to come read this beautiful piece you have just written.. it was wonderful!!!
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Yey!
This is a cool and magical image, I love Fairies and Pixies. Thanx for bringing this to my attention.
USpace
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Why thank you James for dropping by
I did do alright by the pic and background eh lol
Love ya sweetie
Susan~~~
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LOL
And what swiss bank would you like those points deposited in ?
Thanks for the thumbs it, it was this or a mint silver glitter green but me liked this one better
Love ya sis
Your sis
Susan~~~
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It is enchanting , Seems to vibrate of the page. I've never been that big of a fan with pixies and the like , But this seems to have something I enjoyed. Very opened and thoughtful. Sort of reminds me of glimpsing upon a hidden orchard where magical things are happening. Good word choice also. Very pretty.
Love to you my dear friend ,
James
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If you change this background, I will personally come out to KY and kick some butt. This complements the senryu perfectly. So now you have been told. ROFLOL. Keep up the good work sis...by the way have you deposted those 50 francs yet in the Swiss account?
~Willow~
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