I wish I could explain the torrent of
emotions raging through my soul.
How could you leave me here in this
cruel, unforgiving place?
Alone.
Forgotten.
Invisible.
People stop & turn to stare, no doubt
wondering why I'm here.
I wonder what they're thinking, as they
look right past me to the wall behind.
I'm abandoned.
A dark shadow.
Out of place.
The only place I seem to belong is in
the strength of your warm embrace.
But the warmth left with you...
And I no longer fit in.
Author notes
Let's see...not much of an explanation for this one. I was sitting in the library at school today, watching people walk past & marveling at the fact that no one stopped to find out why I wasn't in class. In a world full of selfish ambition, I really shouldn't have been surprised...but it made me think.
Written September 10th, 2004
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This was a deep poem,and it made me think,so did the authors comment. You make a really good point. I love the poem! Keep writing great stuffz! -
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Wow... very deep piece. I really like the meaning behind it, as well as your author's comment. Great job with writing this!
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I love the style you used here. The way it's set up and read really works with the feeling you put into this... Stuck there, in the middle of everything, alone, and nobody notices because one of the few people who cares was the one that left you there...
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I like this one....its different then your normal stuff....almost darker than you are....but its really good. love how you got the idea! ttyl....Leigh
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wow, I love this. nice descriptions and sad. Very good, laterz Infer
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Lots of description in this one, I like the imagery you had to offer. Great write.
~JASMINE
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