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Never Again

"Never Again"-Ben Aaker

Another day filled with smiles.
Again,
I laugh.
You've joined my side.
My mind,
My soul,
My heart,
My Princess, it's all yours.

Another night of painful tears.
Again,
I cry,
You've left my side.
My mind,
My soul,
My heart,
My Princess, all you hurt.

Another dream of cherished memories.
Again,
I dream
Of you by my side.
My mind,
My soul,
My heart,
My Princess, all you built.

Another late night phone call to say one thing.
Again,
No answer,
Just a cluttered message from
My mind,
My soul,
My heart.
"My Princess, I Love You"

Another news story of a girl who died.
Again,
I'm shocked,
You fell from my side.
My mind,
My soul,
My heart,
My Princess, all lost.

And so I’m left alone.
You see, I left a message,
But you never made it home...

You never made it home.

Author notes

This is a poem of my life in reality now, and the tragic ending my dreams kindly added on. It's a good thing I don't believe in prophetic dreams.. or rather my personal dreams being prophetic.
Written September 10th, 2004

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  • passionate-poet
    October 28, 2007

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    wow this is an intense poem it almost made me cry its really swet and really sad at the same time thank you for sharing


  • Goddess of Roses
    December 16, 2004
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    i definitly like ur style and you convey such sadness in short lines. its really good.


  • VolcomSheDevil
    November 16, 2004
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    Wow this is such an amazing poem! I really liked it! I also liked you're profile! Maybe we can chat sometime! Anwyays awesome job! Definatley keep writing!

  • CapitalD
    October 11, 2004
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    great

    CapitalD- nice to be back, i thought of what u might be up to writing wise, so i read this and it kinda reminded me of just chillin and killin time, drunkin freestyles and shit, ive got one comin up soon, take it easy and enjoy csu, see ya in december.


  • WhiteTigerlily
    September 30, 2004
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    Sad and beautiful

    This was very beautiful and sad... what can i say? I am sorry for what happened. I have also recetly lost a friend, of which i have written a poem about. Hope you have time to drop by. Again, this was a good write.... take care.

  • pozo
    September 10, 2004
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    This is such a sad poem, I have one of the same title so I was curious as to how you'd written this and pleasantly surprised to find this wonderful, personal, although deeply sad poem. A great, moving poem- keep writing because despite the sadness this was well-written.

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