The power within ; Manic
hysteria abounds as a
impulse pulsating ; Nervously
fluctuating, dangerously.
Stress levels off the scales,
dipping and diving; Highs
and lows, flowing and ebbing
from the very core.
Caffeine induced calm, false
sense of security waits in
the wings of now, gathering
breaths, in great gulps.
Remembered peacefulness,
penetrates the sub-conscious
willing it's return; Sanity
returns slowly to it's owner.
Serenity, brain waves lucid;
Intact and coherent, patterns
zig-zag with prompting. A
pause, then composition.
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Written September 9th, 2004
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Lovely write
You know I like how you handle yourself with these and it is indeed so lovely. -
Thank you
I am glad you enjoyed it 
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A rollercoaster of emotion, then all ended well. Very nice job on this. Your style is unique. I like it!
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Thank you. Confusion heightens the awareness
I am glad you enjoyed this
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you did well with the placement of the words. it really added to the confusion you were describing.
good job --
courtney -
Thank you Elizabeth I am glad you enjoyed it
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Thank you Yes thats me ........" Fragmented thoughts " thank you for the kind words, they are greatly appreciated
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This is great. I love the fluid motion of the poem: it runs like a river. My fav. lines: "The power within ; Manic
hysteria abounds as a
impulse pulsating ; Nervously
fluctuating, dangerously." Kudos. Write on!
Cheers,
SilentScar
((Elizabeth)) -
this was great, the fragmented thoughts, the language skills, the composition. I thoroughly enjoyed all points of this poem. It makes you think, stop, then think some more. lol. Which is the best kind, in my opinion. Wonderful job.
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Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. Have my sombre head on today
Oh how I long for my whimsy head to return Your words are always appreciated 
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excellent
Nicely spoken!
I like this ending;
"Serenity, brain waves lucid;
Intact and coherent, patterns
zig-zag with prompting. A
pause, then composition."
In this you say a lot of good points that people should listen too!
Excellently done!
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