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my best friend
my best fried never believes me when i tell her she's pretty.
She denies anything good about herself, but i think differently.
She's smart,talented,and throws a mean fastball.Her poetry is like a cool breeze on a hot day.
my best friend always tells me I look great, but i never say it back.
my best friend

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about my very good friend
Written September 9th, 2004

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  • nobodys-girl
    September 26, 2004
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    hey i was just reading this again and i just got to say thankyou sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much ok i'll c u monday byebye.

  • puppies13
    September 14, 2004
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    lol thanx lylas


  • nobodys-girl
    September 10, 2004
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    thanks so much hun love it i talk to u later love ya bye

  • puppies13
    September 9, 2004
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    this is my first poem in a while lol