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9/11

This poem is dedicated to the victims and family of victims of 9/11
~*-*~
The twin towers,
once stood tall,
a plane ruined it all,
after a while,
the pain still lingered,
It will stay for a while,
Hopefully somday,
The pain will pass away,
but we will never forget,
The victims of 9/11,
I mean,
just to think,
Such a horrible thing can happen,
It just leaves you with a bad memory,
like permanent ink.
Someday,
I hope
The world can live in peace,
We will no longer have to cope,
I just wish,
Someday, somehow,
Maybe even now,
That the world will have no wars,
All there will be, is some open doors,
The doors will be left open,
Open for anyone,
That is,
For anyone that wants to stay,
Stay in a world,
No war, all play
~*-*~
(Not the best poem, but it's okay)


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This poem is dedicated to the victims of 9/11.
Not the best, but okay.
Written September 9th, 2004

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