the night sky howls screaming with pain
the vessel is bruised and feverish
scatted drops of acid fall upon my shelter
burning my flesh, scorning my soul
the black stripe of sorrow
the desolate soul of lies
my failings spread out
i fall deeper into my denial
the howling ceases to penetrate my hearing
my sobs are louder than the pounding rain
my shame is deeper than the ocean
i am lost and i keep falling deeper into the holes i have created
throughout my life to stop my reoccurring patterns of lies denial and shame.
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Written September 9th, 2004
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the night sky howls screaming with pain the vessel is bruised and feverish scatted drops of acid fall upon my shelter
burning my flesh, scorning my soul the black stripe of sorrow
the desolate soul of lies my failings spread out i fall deeper into my denial the howling ceases to penetrate my hearing
my sobs are louder than the pounding rain my shame is deeper than the ocean i am lost and i keep falling deeper into the holes i have created hroughout my life to stop my reoccurring patterns of lies denial and shame. this was a great write and I appreciate your sharing it with us. I hope to see more from you in the future. Never stop writing and keep up the good work.. As long as you keep dreaming then your imaginationa dntalent shall never subside. I really liked the way that you worded things. It really speaks to the reader.
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