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waxing and waning
this white wantonness clouded
swan cycling dark waves
myra
2002
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PHOTO: My son, Herman Lochner 2002 England
Written June 29th, 2002
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A deep darkness here underneath the waves, behind the words
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It is very lovely, a wonderful Haiku.
(The white text on this background (which is a beauty) makes it a little hard to read and gives it a washed out appearance - makes it very hard to read in places - Luckily - not where the poem is!!)
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elegance...purely divine -
Thank you, Gwion ... I really miss you ... I'm glad that you are back ...
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Thank you Shadid, for always reading and commenting ... Always good to see you ... -
don't touch it!
Thankzzzzz@myra for sharing...another beautiful write..
ps. as usual...'don't touch it' :)
regards...shadid -
don't touch it!
So beautiful! You are the haiku queen! :D -
Mona, dear, luckily you do not have to swim this steam LOL Thanks for reading, Poetess ...
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Laughs@Ian
Well, you've got the heart of the poem there, Poet ... strum on! -
Thanks@Gecko ... a never-ending poem ...
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don't touch it!
beauuuuuuuuuuuutiful -
don't touch it!
dum de de dum de
da de da dum de de da
dum de de da dum
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brilliant :) -
excellent
a drop of snow breathes
on water floats continuance
feathers pure moistened -
Thanks for the read, Jaden ... pretty, hey? LOL I would not say ..
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don't touch it!
Very pretty. Thanks.
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