I cannot help but stand idly by
while my Dixie, my Dixie trembles
trembles from anticipation
eager to relieve herself
to hitch up her dress and prostrate herself
she has this desire, my Dixie
to tame vicious savages with love
or perhaps, not even that
but with her nether regions
that she calls (as she giggles)
her "Region of Madness"
and, i quite believe her,
for we all go mad, both them, and me
when confronted with the delicacy of her sex
of which -
she bares happily and to almost anyone
(I said, ALMOST...)
but they, they usually bulge
at the neck, veiny - hot blood coursing
and my Dixie, she trembles, and bulges
a tempestuous release when they mount her
but, always from behind
'cuz Dixie wont look at them
she cant she says
unless she has the crop
and holds the reins
she will not, my Dixie,
succumb to their will
and therefore refuses their dominance
but when fucking Dixie
- no man - and i mean this literally, NO MAN-
would complain,
when entrapped,
in her bare Region of Madness
Nyx...
Author notes
As per my Loverly's request: Judas Denied made the background, if you steal it, she'll hunt you down and eat you.
Written September 8th, 2004
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this points system is entirely mercenary, if you ask me, which i'm aware you do not.
i'm certain even if i look stupid and everyone disagrees, that dixie is the savage. the men don't know better. yeah, every time i read these, dixie is the mad savage. judas too, by the looks of things :-) -
No worries, i can explain
When a poet puts their poem in the Featured Box (top rght hnd thingy) they donate a certain amount of points so that item will show up. Say, 100 points. and, they then decide how many points they want to be used, for each person that clicks IE: 10. so for every person that clicks, 10 points is used. So 10 points per click with 100 points, means that 10 people can view the poem. When you dont comment however, and just click, its like you're using up the points that someone else might have used, to view and comment on the work.
When featured works ARE up in the comment box, you DO get an EXTRA 3 points for commenting when you've clicked, so, it's a win win situation!
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I didnt comment before because the dixie in your poem reminds me so much of someone I know. The writing is very good though... I dont understand how the points thing works so I dont know what you meant when you said I wasted yours. Mary
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And so yeah, being the pig that I am, I wonder what she does when she masturbates...and do you watch from your seat at the peephole? Maybe she uses your hand for her toy. She makes me think and one thing I think is: She is mad and she thrives on that madness. That and her ability to conquer. But she is a control freak and maybe her desire for control, her talent for it stems more from fear. This bitch has layers and I love it every time you peel back another one for us voyeurs to lap at.
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Stunning writing. I was enthralled by your words, and now I find myself wondering more about this Dixie. What makes her tick? What turns her around, twists her insides until she's not so sure of herself any more. This poem really evoked images and I'd love to see a sequel to this maybe from her point of view. This was a terribly lovely poem.
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