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Waiting Out the Storm

Tress are a blowing
Clouds soaring through the sky
Billowing low to the ground like smoke from a fire

Wind rustling through the tress
Making a calming shh-ing sound
Causing my mind to wander about
As I watch the bands of clouds roll thought the sky

All I can do is sit and wait
For the storm to take full effect
Sit and linger, anticipating the end of this continuous terror
Not knowing if this storm or the next will wipe me out
Leave me homeless
Or will I live through this one to see more bad weather

Author notes

Eh something short and crappy i wrote up one night while waiting out these hurricanes that keep terrorizing florida..hurricane alley, yay?!

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Written September 8th, 2004

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  • DarkAngel2
    November 5, 2004
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    hehe yes rain is awesome but not in massive heavy amounts. There was a light rain almost a mist this morning at school that was ideal for like dancing and just being free hehe..rambling EVIL HURRICANES!! but they're gone now thank goodness..

    Sarah


  • Angelpie Julie
    October 30, 2004
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    Suuuuperbbbb

    Muahaha Ivan kill! Jeanne Kill! Charley Kill! lol sorry, I hated it! I hate storms... but I love afternoon rains. Try that? lmao just kidding, I love your stuff!


  • DarkAngel2
    September 9, 2004
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    oh yes now that Ivan is coming to kill us all again x.x. hehe thank you for the comment

    ~Sarah~


  • Tweak
    September 8, 2004
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    ya know, livin in florida i know exactly where you stand... especially now! you presented an awesome visual even for those who'd never been in a storm themselves... i took alot of delight in reading this piece. awesome!