colors
glowing bright
rainbow sadness
flickering lights
blinding
my eyes
can you see?
glorious colors
of rapture
intertwine
with your soul
in the moon light
of silver shimmers
~Lady Raven~
Author notes
More words that just came to me.
Written September 6th, 2004
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That is wonderful!! The stars of your eye and the shadows of your heart combine to produce true power!! ~~
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Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Thank you so much for the comment. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Hugs, Lady Raven -
I am glad you enjoyed this piece.
Hugs and bites, Lady Raven -
Thank you so much for that beautiful comment.
Edited on Sep 09, 9:52 because ''. -
Sounds like the strumming of a sadly sweet guitar, like riding in someone else's car, let's try to not go too far...not like this...not like this....
Peace Through Love. ET -
great job. your words are simple, yet they depict such a clear image in my mind.
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great job.. i think this was great it set a really good mood. beatufil colors and picture keep up the good work
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Besides the fact that it just doesn't seemed finished, its really good. The use of colorful words, and I think the picture fit really well to. Wonderful Job overall.
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beautiful pic. loved the play of few but rich words...perfect flow .. really mood setting..just amusingly nice pice to read
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