There once was a dolphin called Bill;
Who had some exceptional skills;
He could bob for an apple,
shake fins with his keeper,
and always trod water so well.
Author notes
Sorry it's pathetic. Mixture of choices, Dolphins and limerick.
Written September 8th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- 15 Popped Out of My Head Right This Second Choices by chasedbythecows.
300 points, ended September 13, 2004, 17 entries
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it's not pathetic, since it's about dolphins, how could it be pathetic? and even if it wasn't it still would be good (or maybe not, b/c you'd be writing a whole new topic, but then again it might just be the same...) anyway very good poem, I like it a lot...
~Colleen
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Thank you I am glad you liked it
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No,
Thank you for pointing it out
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Gee, I dont know about "pathetic"...i found it rather lovely. I can't write these at all. When i try i get all messed up with the rhymes and know one can tell what it is supposed to be. Good luck in the contest !! Blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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nice little poem..one thing....on line two did you intend to write 'exceptional skills'...cute write cutiepie..thanx
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