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The Fellowship's Journey

The journey was proposed,
and though fraught with many risks,
the nine agreed to go.

Though faced with hardship, loss
and strife, they persevered,
courageous heroes all.

now here at journey’s end,
their task at last complete,
they sail into the west.

Author notes

this had to be written in tercets and trimeter, hence the brevity of it. I tried to think of a subject that also had to do with the theme of 3, and this popped into my head- a trilogy, how appropriate.
Written March 7th, 2004

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  • Lonely
    April 17, 2005
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    Good poem Kerowyn, tho its short, its really descriptive... thank you for entering my contest... bust you just missed a rule.. please check out the rules again...

    GOod luck
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