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~Mating of Minds~

Caressed by your words,
Enticed, mesmerized by you
And your resonating mind,
Encompassed by your magnetism,
Lucidity & senses, both consumed
by your psyche.
Engrossed in deep contemplation...
At your profound intellect,
yet laid back demeanour...
Mind intoxicated with thought,
Entwined in procreation
This the intimacy,
The mating of minds,
Together emanating Love's act...

Author notes

Written 4 a person I hold close to my heart... Thank you 4 being you my dear friend
Written October 7th, 2004

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  • Yemassee gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Mating of minds, a play on words. I like it! I never thought of two minds collaborating as procreation, that was creative! Good work!


  • Barefoot Messiah
    November 13, 2006
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    It's been two years and I still come here to read this poem. You are truly and wonderfully talented with your words.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    April 17, 2005
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    I know this feeling and connection VERY well indeed. There is nothing like it and each is so different and yet so priceless. I love the way you've spun it all together here. Excellent piece, don't change a word! Blessed Be, Gypsy


  • Sara Bellem
    September 14, 2004
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    Aw! This is so very sweet! I love the way you have beautifully written this You are so wonderful in the way you have written and expressed yourself here, this person who you wrote this to must be really special, just like you ---Sara