Heaven, the place where I have been to visit
Exceptional sights, beautiful flora gardens.
Angels singing with angelic voices so sweet
Visions beyond the imagination I have seen.
Each soul sits beneath the auric rays of colours
Never have I seen a waterfall of such brilliance.
Lightly to cleanse the souls that gather beneath
Yellow; purple; green; red and blue; to name a few.
As I ascend to the highest realm in the heavens
Uncertain no more for the joy I feel is so surreal
Reaching to the heavens high with arms outstretched.
Angels by my side taking me back to my earthly body
Saying, "It’s not your time, you must go home for now."
Author notes
This is an Acrostic Poem
Written September 7th, 2004
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Completely left in awe and amazement with your words and the way the picture enhances your imagery of your pen
Jim
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wow a beautifully written poem! Such visualisation, it is truly wonderful! Best of luck for the contest!
x
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Thank you shubs for reading my poem, your comment must have become lost amongst all the IM'S from the group I'm in.
it happened to a Friend of mine and I wrote from what she told me she saw.
Jennifer
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Heavenly
This is so heavenly and a true majestic write up Jenni a work so real nay ethereal..me on cloud nine and in seventh heaven after reading this wonderful treatise==Shubs -
very beautiful image
This is a very beautiful acrostic, I am glad you asked me for advice on it, for it has worked out very well, it's a shame you did not do well with it in the contest, but hey, you beat me with your first trophy, I had to wait a long time before I got my first one ~Love~Joan
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Yes this is it to be able to tell what kind you are writing this is called acrostic poem it ios written acording to the headig nice you changed it it maked t perfect now
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This is an ACROSTIC PEOM u hsould have inscribe the name on it since i have help out u wil add acrostic to it in braket ok jenni is the writing accfroding to the tittlle i like this alot u are making something out of this poeom wchich many are not yet to know in the mirrior of mode
it all abt a man, you, me, had past away into the heavenly way if i may say this but time was not yet speaking on him for he own more than residue to life
R eaching up to the heavens high with arms outstretched.
A ngels by my side taking me back to my earthly body
S aying it’s not your time, you must go back home for now.
this word make it all perfect jeni nice poem i hope to see more and make coment to it
HEAVENLY AURAS(ACROSTIC) Add it like thsi as the title ok it wil diferentiate it fromthe other poems too -
Lovely
Beautiful imagery and the acrostic is great. Flows free and the visions are magnificient.
Love from India - Joel - -
well dear jennifer.. i never did say or meant that i didnt like the aura part.. i just said i likes the heaven part more than the aura part.. .. hope you understand me.. .. take cares and have a nice time dear.. just keep it up my friend.. your humble little friend...
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.... - vic ( who else? )
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Thank you Vic for your comment, why don't you like the AURAS part? everyone and everything has an Aura
jennifer
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5 stars *****
humn...
.. nah.. not to you, this time it is to this write... marvellous.. wonderful... classic piece i should say... ummm.. and yeah... the first part... the part of HEAVENLY was a better one according to me.. i mean.. hey.. i liked the whole poem.. but more did i like the former part... .. nice work dear... take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up jennifer... your humble little friend... .... .... .... - vic ( who else? )
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This is really good! I've never been reall good at acrostics, so I admire you for being good at it. Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck! Keep up the great work!
God bless you,
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Erika ~~~~~
P.S. If you have any questions, IM me!
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Thank you Kevin, they are hard at first, but once you get the hang of them they get easier. Thank you for your lovely comment-Jennifer
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hey. this is cool. i can't do the letter thing. this is great.
i really like it. keep up the great work.
~kevin~
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