You were so right about feelings
Fading
Constantly lessening themselves
I realize now that my love is
Fading
Forever slowly disappearing
Fading
Fading
Turning into shades
Of fading
You told me that your memory would be
Fading
Erasing from my mind
I see now your presence is
Fading
Being erased from my life
Fading
Fading
Turning into shades
Of fading
Somehow it's all gone
Kinda wishing it was not
We had a good time
-Enjoyed your pick-up line
Yet I hardly see you
In my eyes all you do
Is fading
Fading
Fading
Turning into shades
Of fading
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Written January 23rd, 2004
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Once again, a poem I wrote in Korea. This one, however, is about the same guy I wrote "penetration" about. He was my manager.... (I'll never do it again!)
He told me that once I got back home to Denmark, my feelings for him would begin to fade, and I would forget him.
I have not forgotten him, but I do remember him as one big collection of facades now.... -
aaah... this must be another poem about that guy who's gone... my sympathies to you. you really seem really sad about this guy not being around anymore... but then again this poem could be about someone completely different. it's always good to be open-minded... i also agree with pattyann. 'shades of fading' is really good for this poem. good luck in your writing, my friend.
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"Shades of fading" I love the phrase. It gives animation to it and helps your poem flow. Good structure to your poem. I really like this one very much. Hugs, Patricia
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