Long have I waited to be this happy
Long have I waited to feel so loved
Long have I waited to finally love myself
Long have I waited to say these words
I've never felt this happy
I've never felt this good
I've never felt so loved
I've never felt so content
You give me things no one else can
You give eternal love
You give me joy beyond any words
You give me my lifeblood
I was dead for so long
I never thought I'd be happy
I thought I'd always be alone
I didn't think you'd find me
I'm so thankful to have you here
You make me feel so beautiful
I'm so thankful that you love me so
You make me feel so wonderful
There are so many words I could use
But none of them exceeds those nights
They are when I can truly show you
What you've done for me
I could never love another
The way that I love you
I could never have any other
There is and only will be you
You are my light in the darkness
You are my life when I feel dead
You are my tourniquet when I'm bleeding
You will be my husband when we wed
I'll be with you forever
Even if you leave me
I am forever yours
Even if you don't want me
My heart is yours, you own my soul
I love you more than life
I'd die if I ever lost you
You mend my heart, you end my strife
All you are to me
Is what you read and more
You are my everything
I love you more than ever before
Author notes
1.Head over heals in love
Written September 5th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Extreme Emotions by Loveshidingplace.
300 points, ended July 17, 2005, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Deep. -Is left speechless.-
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Thank you.
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I know exactly how you feel, being in love and all.. This is a really good poem. Good luck in the contest, and great job!
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Thank you for your kind words. I didn't really write it from my point of view, but I appreciate your comment.
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This is beautiful and the background you chose is perfect! I am so glad you have found your happiness. You write about it with a beautiful elogance!
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Thank you for your kind words. Good luck with judging.
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This is very sweet. I enjoyed reading it. I like the way that your words flow nicely together. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more of your writings. Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest. luv
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I'm glad you enjoyed reading.
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Aww this is so cute. I like the way you set this poem up and the flow was great. Good luck ^.^. MoonShadow
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Thank you fory our comment. I'm glad it seemed to fit together well.
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Sad, melancholy and yet loving.. Seems like a contradiction but yet those concepts seem to sit well within the text of this poem.. Wonderful write indeed..
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~smiles~
"I never thought I'd be happy
I thought I'd always be alone
I didn't think you'd find me"
...smooth.
I like the grace you display in the poem, and the fact that you've let it be as long as it is. Too often people cut down thier poems because they don't think someone will read it. Thanks!
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I'm absolutely sure that I read the rules but I don't think I saw the one where it said I had to put ERIN in my author's comments. I just did that though. Is there anything else that I forgot to do?
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This is very beautifully written with a lot of emotions involved~angelica
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That is beautiful...but please read the rules love. This is wonderful... it has a great chance...
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This piece is very well written, it has me wide-eyed and wishing I could write as well as you. It potrays a story some have and many want in their lives, very deep and very romantic. Great job if I do say so myself. Good luck in contest!
Love,
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Awww.. Such emotion and love. The repeating words in the stanzas make your love much more evident and stronger. A very sweet and solid write. Thanks for entering!
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Nice write!
I enjoyed reading this. There was so much heart felt emotion in this. I like the way you have added the occasional rhyming. Thanks for entering and good luck x -
hey good write, i enjoyed it. Good job. Keep writting. It was really sweet
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beautiful masterpiece
this is nice.like a tree trapped in eternal winter,to finally feel the warm of spring and the return of the summer sun's love.
excellent piece.
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so loving so blah **gasps** i want more its so awesome so beautiful........**claps** oncore oncore
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