Truth in power
No such thing
In either
Holding truth
Keeping power
Everything?
Nothing
A contradiction in terms
Skewed by their essence
Solidified by their existance
Everything from nothing?
No-one?
Or something from anyone
What does it take?
To make a contradiction
A reality
Strength?
Honesty?
Soul?
What would it take?
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Written September 6th, 2004
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it would take something that we are not seen as having. I absolutly love your way of thinking!
This poem is without a doubt one of the most weird yet wonderfull i have read in a while and it puts across a point a questionabe point on your side but i love it!
The words that you used where almost powerfull in themselfs! God i think maybe i enjoyed this poem more than others i have read!
absolutly great write!
I'll be checking back withyou again
Laura
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i like this poem this is a very good poem .expressed how you feel is very good! i like a really lot it cool!! poem i give it about a 100 or more if it was an a contest!! sorry to go voverboard but i really love and like it i love all poetrybut i sem to cant write it very well myself again very excellent poem
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I enjoyed this. I liked this a lot. I really don't know how else to describe my likings for it without feeling like I'm repeating myself again. But really this is a great poem.
Sara -
dont touch!
I like this. I can tell that you wrote it... you have your own way of writing and that is clearly shown in this piece.
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