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how's it feel to want?

i want to be beautiful
i want to be happy
i want to have a million friends

i want to love
i want to be loved
i want to not be so afraid of it all

i want to make friends with the cool kids
i want to have old friendships back
i want to take back that one drunken night
i want to crash

i want to laugh and cry at once
i want to be the best snowboarder in the world
i want to not hate some people
i want to learn new things

i want that shirt and hey that jacket too
i want to be a millionaire
i want to drive a Porsche
i want to stay a little girl forever

i want all these things
i want people to stop saying how's it feel to want
cause all these things i want can be got

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uh huh, i like it, how about you?
Written September 6th, 2004

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  • Confessionest
    November 21, 2004
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    I love it, and you are already beautiful..I mean HELLO!! Sexi Mexi!!!

    <3 Erika

  • kapaja
    September 21, 2004
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    It is good. I like it. I especially liked the ending, that isn't what I thought it would be. Way cool. I love you and I miss you tons!! -kasia

  • simply frozen23
    September 6, 2004
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    umm... i dont know... it kind of depends on how my mom is doing... and if my uncle comes to live with us... preferably, i hate my house, but im sure you feel the same way about yours, because everyone does about their own house, you know? lol. but yeah, im good either way.... oh yes, and wednesday, at about 4:15, you should go to Kataluma chai... if you dont know where it is, call me. 876 2316. <3-- erin

  • dccrunner
    September 6, 2004
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    Wow. Everyone has regrets and I've found that the only way to get past those are to run out and regret some more! (I'm only kidding.)
    I can't honestly say I want all of those things but quite a few of them. I think you're beautiful. But I know it doesn't mean the same coming from me than it would from someone else. You're a great friend and I love you! (If you had a million friends you probably wouldn't have time for the lowly socially declined people like me!)
    Thought provoking poem.
    Elizabeth

  • darklatina
    September 6, 2004
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    I totally wnat that this weekend! who's house your or mine?, see i'm telling ya we just have a conection with poetry adn such.....lol ttyl-love ya-Jessi

  • simply frozen23
    September 6, 2004
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    i love it. i want all those things too! oh me goodness... i reread it... and yes, every single one of those things. holy cow. this weekend: you, me, couch potatoes and chick flicks?

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