Jesus Christ carried the cross through the streets for me,
He took all my burdens and sins , He set me free,
He lifted my soul up so my eyes could see clear,
I denied God all my life, He taught me not to fear.
Our Lord never gave up, he never abandoned me.
He sent me my own angel, a sweet young man was he,
My mind has been opened to the wonders of God's love,
God taught me to believe in Him and in Heaven above.
His love is filling my life in so many special ways,
I feel his presence in the dark each night as I pray,,
He brings calmness to the turmoil in my life,
I no longer feel all their anger or let them cause me strife.
I found the Lord and here he will stay,
I will follow him forever, His words I shall always obey,
He gives me comfort from all my heartache and fears,
Whenever I need a friend I know God is near.
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Written September 5th, 2004
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i could hear music behind this......god's blessings to you too, sandygram.......
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Thamk you for taking the time to read my poem, God's wonder. I appreciare the nice comment. I wrote it from my heart. The two lines that seened to be forced, really weren't, it was what I felt at the time. I guess I was writing it for myself and didn't think about how it sounded to others. All of my poem about God are written from my heart. I do appreciate the advice. I wish more people would be honest. Being a new poet, I have so much to learn. Thanks again. Take care, Sadsy
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Beautiful and personal. I caught a glimpse of your personal story but it was general enough that anyone could relate.
I did think 'see clear' and 'fear' rhyme was a bit forced, but flow is very subjective.
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leave such a nice comment. I appreciate it. I am always glad when someone enjoys my poems about our sweet Lord. Take care, Sandy
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So full of hope and love. This really is so lovely.
Many Blessings
~Flaymez~
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I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. I am honored when peolpe enjoy reading them. I only found God two months ago at the age of sixty. I only started writing poetry in June God helps to guide me while writing His poems.Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave such a lovely comment. I appreciate it. I love when people enjoy my poems about our Lord. He guides me in what to write. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you pozo, I appreciate it when people like my poems about our Lord. He guides me in what to write, it is all so new to me. It has been so wonderful the past two months. I hope it never changes and I never take God for granted. Take care Sandy
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Awwe this is beautiful. I just watched "The Passion of the Christ" last night (I know, I'm slow
) so this is all fresh on my mind and heart right now anyway. Such horror he went through when he could've stopped it, but he didn't. He loved us enough to see his plan through. Very nice write indeed.
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i just love this poem so much! i'm a great believer in God and the fact that He is with us everystep of our journey; nursing and loving us. that He is a part of everything we do. i just love this poem.
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A wonderful write, I liked it a lot- such a true poem with a strong, good message
Keep writing and thanks for commenting on my poem, dreams are always nice
God bless, Pozo
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leave a nice comment. I appreciate it, Take care, Sandy God bless you
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Wonderful poem,He carried a big burden for you and I! God bless you,and keep you well.
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