I'd fallen short, or
somehow just fell;
I was waitin' for an open, door
I just sat there waitin'..
My heart was on the floor
seemed I hadn't picked it up yet;
My dreams seemed to soar
but this one, I might just get..
I'm not so lonely, I was never alone
You're still here for me patiently
I'm coming back home...
You still say,
"I'm here for you darlin'
You know I won't leave
just don't forget.
I'm still writin' up your story,
You'll love how it goes.
"Please don't forget,
to remember me,
I died so I could write you,
This story;
I lived for you, now live for Me..."
My passions seem to drive me
in different directions;
But Your eyes see clearly,
You're the one I lean on..
I let You take the lead
of this life I no longer own,
I'll cry and I'll bleed but,
I'll still fight 'till You're known...
I'm not so lonely, I was never alone
You're still here for me patiently,
I'm coming back home.
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Author notes
When I wrote the first one, ([Yet to be titled]), I was at a point in my life where I was royally confused about, well.. just about everything. Things are still confusing, but I can see a little clearer where God's leading me, and He's showing me that He's got awesome things planned, I just need to follow with all I've got. This just goes to show that God is faithful, and He is still writing our stories, He's got great things in store, but we need to be patient for it all to unfold. God bless, keep kneelin'
-ashley=)
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Written September 4th, 2004
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*Sniff* *Sniff* You're amazing Ashums. I loved this poem, because it is so... you. You're whole life lives out this poem. Man, I wish I could be like you in so many ways. Love you hun.
Anna Banana
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This was really nice, I liked it alot. It was as if you emerged from this dark hole or something and saw the amazing grace of God. Very unique and easy to read because it was a perfect length. Great rhyme, interesting shift after the quotation. Anyway....great job!
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hey - awesome, it flowed, was original, well worded...ive missed your writing!! - not visited for a while :/ - sorry! How are you anyway?
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Hey sis,
It was great to see another poem of your up. It was fun to read, and I'm sure fun for you to write. It sounds like it just flowed.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Your bro,
Matt
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