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Lay it on Me

Look at you, with those piercing, smoldering eyes that make my mouth water with all kinds of juices.
I'm caught like a deer in the headlights, just when I thought I was getting away.
Pin me to the wall.
Strip me with your lips, let your teeth ravage my body.
Legs open wide, arms tied to the ceiling.
"What are you lookin' for babe?
I'm not hiding anything."

Throw me on your bed butt-naked,
Tell me all the holes you want to put it in.
Name them like a science teacher hooked on anatomy.
Put your face real close to mine so I can smell your breath and what you ate,
Raviolis, A Coke-a-Cola, and my pussy.
Lay it on me like a bullet,
Fling my bra and panties over the T.V. set,
Use the lub like there's no tommorow
And we'll be out for a breather sometime next year.
This has been my dream denied 16 years,
A lesson in love and lust no school teacher or preacher could ever lecture.
I've learned from you, therefore I've learned from the best.

Take it like a man, I know you are.
Let me ride you like a Grand Champion at a horse race.
Pull it out when you can feel the orgasim trickle up your dick,
And let it build up 'till it wants to scream and you just might scream-
Out my name!

After all is quite hold me close, 'cause I'm so sore I can't move.
And you can't either but, you don't want to (Not telling me though; keepin' it a secret)
Smell the sex like an open draft from the window on a spring morning, or when you just opened the dryer and smothered you face in the snuggle bear scent, but only this time it's new "Punani Scented Downy".

Screw me, hard, with a bonified index finger, under the American Eagle skirt not paid for yet; in the dressing room.
Make me want all over again, now!
And leave a half an hour early for the matinee,
So we can be scandelous with our pants around our ankles,
Hold me closer during the scary scenes.

Damn, don't turn away from me when I'm starring in those pale horny eyes! Look at me when I'm fucking you!

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zagnuts
Written September 4th, 2004

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  • September 11, 2004
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    this is an excellent poem - once again you riddle your poem with very cool lines jolting the reader - ps this was also one of the hottest poems i've read

  • iluveggs
    September 7, 2004
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    now this is the erotica i love to find...thank you so much for helping insipre me to a few good moments when i get back to my boy.


  • Lady Patricia
    September 6, 2004
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    HAHAH!!
    "DAMN YOU, LOOK AT ME WHEN IM FUCKING YOU!!!!!" oh jesus christ chelsea!!!
    ITS BRILLIANT!! FUCKING BRILLIANT
    THE EROTIC SCENE THAT PLAYED BEFORE MY EYES WAS AWESOME TOO, I COULD SEE A THONG AND A BRA THROWN ATOP A TV HALF HANGING, and i can see two bodies wrestling, i can see a caucasion male with black hair and brown eyes rising, grinning after he;s just... gone down i supposeis a very appropriate way of saying such, and kissing you with a passion! bloody awesome.
    i give you a goddamn 22 out of a ten.
    great fucking job
    lol... great quote..
    trish


  • grand theft autumn
    September 4, 2004
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    uhh... wow
    wow
    lol this is incredible I want it really bad now LOL this is like, the best erotica poem I have ever read, especially coming from a 16 year old I know the feeling so well and you have wonderful talent- best of luck in the contest hope u win
    ~Autumn