Believe in yourself!
My first day of 1st grade
Started in the worst way!
~The End~
Author notes
My teacher yelled as us the whole day...but she's better now, my Mom said she would go talk to her otherwise.
Written September 3rd, 2004
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Awwww I'm sorry first grade started in the worst way.
But nothing stays the worst forever. Good write.
Expressive and honest.
Brian -
aw I think teachers are nice..in most cases.. she probably was nervous as you were.. you did a nice job on this..keep writing ok..Linda
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awww kisses ur cheek hows my lil brother?
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oh, well done That's great tell your mom well done too
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Thank you, I'm doing better now. I got student of the month and yesterday I got an author's award and a special pen! My mom got helper of the month.
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Aww, this is a sad poem. Don't worry- school can be fun especially when you're starting. In England, where I live, we have infants that are about your age and I had lots of fun there, we watched TV, played games, all sorts of fun things Also- you learn a lot.
Sad poem, but I liked the rhyme
All the best,
Thanks for commenting on my poem,
I love the kitten
Pozo
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Ty,
Don't worry school gets better as you go along and sooner or later it ends. So just keep toughing it out. Hailey's in the same boat you are. She just started 1st grade too. I really really liked your poem as usual :-)
Becca -
aw, I'm sure 1st grade will get better for you. I remember my first grade was horrible but I moved around alot.
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aww! Dont worry hun, some teachers are like that. Wow! Year 1! I just started Year 6.. I hope your teacher isnt as moody later..
pinkwhite xxx -
good
this is a pritty nice poem..... kinda short though.... ahhh that is very shor thtough. Very very short. I'd add more.... but then thats just me.... keep up the good work,
Bowie of the knife and spear. -
just for you.
~*Mom*~`
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