your silent screams are deafening
my tears cannot save you as you lay convulsing in my arms
your mind is dead to my pleading
you will not come back
how i long to hear you
to feel your pain
the emptiness i feel is worse than the knife in my heart
why do i need a heart if yours is not beating
the vociferation from the crowd throbs in my ears
they care not for your selfless act
they don't want sacrifice, they want murder
they want my soul
how rude of you to ruin their sport
the sport of their gods
they took you from me
and will now hold me at arms length
while they draw out every last drop of crimson from my veins
they will not let me set you free
they hold me away
all the while your silenced screams echo in my ears
Author notes
Written September 3rd, 2004
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OMG! I love this poem! It has a GREAT flow and creates a clear picture in my mind. WTG!
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It is always scary to loose someone you love in your arms... You expressed the feeling of loosing someone really well, great job writing this.
Keep on penning
Love
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this poem is brilliant, kinda scary to me too lol, but thats me, youve done brill on this one, carry on writtin, it will get ya sumwere seeya later
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Very dark. I don't know about this poem it's sad but it seems half demonic too.
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nice
This is beautiful! Nice job
TTYL,
~sHar0n~
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