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FrUsTrAtIoN


So many emotions flowing through my head
So many feelings I wish to express
Why can't you trust me, to let your feelings go
Why can't you open up, to release all your pain
You ask for a Mother, yet you push me away
You want someone to talk to, but you don't want me
How many times have I walked away from you?
How many times have I given up what we have?
The answer is not once, not once have I gone
I will never leave you and I will never give up
I will never judge you, for my flaws are many
What ever you have done is not labeled in my head
What ever you feel you can't share with me, you can
To be open with each other is a perfect trust
A trust that cannot be broken or mistaken for fake
A love has been placed so deep within my soul
A love that I will never never let go........................

Author notes

It doesn't flow all that great, some feelings I was thinking about and getting frutrated at the fact that someone I care about dearly has so much lack of security for me.  Hurtful? Sure... its a blockage in our relationship and unless that wall falls I believe it will remain a blockage.
Written September 3rd, 2004

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  • Onfire4Jesus
    September 3, 2004
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    Hey there!! Im sorry to hear about the situation. Even though I don't know it, God knows it and since He knows it when I pray for you and your situation, He knows exactly what Im talking about. Its sooo amazing that He knows everything!! Yet so loving as well. Whoever this situation may be with, I pray that God will intervene and allow this person to surrender their whole heart to God so in turn yuns will have a blessed relationship. You take care my friend!! God Bless You!!

  • Mary Hannah
    September 3, 2004
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    great

    This was a great poem Mel. Awesome, and i thought it flowed fine... it rocked. I hope the walls do break.
    Love yur lil sis,
    :::Hannah:::