Don’t wanna hurt,
Don’t wanna cry,
Just wanna lay here,
Please let me die.
Standing here, at the edge of the abyss,
No one here for one last kiss.
Looking down, into the dark,
Sadness creeping into my heart.
Pushing me over,
Watching me fall.
Just like my tears,
On my face they crawl.
Now here I am
Down on bended knees
In front of Death
I beg and plead.
‘Take me away
away from this pain’
Too many tears fall,
Just as the rain.
Time now frozen,
Along with the tears.
Sorrow and pity
Wasted over the years.
Faith in life beyond my reach,
Blood now spilled beneath fallen feet.
Again I fail,
Fail in life.
Lost to sorrow.
Lost to strife.
Hope is gone,
Dreams go unsaid.
Any reasons to live?
Too late.
I’m dead.
Author notes
not sure if i poted this already, prolly not, hope u like 
Written September 2nd, 2004
A contest entry
- Make Me Want To Read Your Poetry by Fax Celestis.
300 points, ended September 29, 2004, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I don't know what to sau but, simply beautiful. The rhyme scheme is genius and I've felt that way too many time to count. I loved it.
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I agree with the other peeps on top ^ I felt like this too at one point (because of a guy) but then I don't know it just didn't matter so much anymore great wirte keep up the good work
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wow...this is really awesom and I think it deserves an applude...bravo...I have no words I think the ryhming was awesom the emotion was just right and not to mention the words were deep and meaningful...I persoanaly connected with it and that makes it all the greater...again awesom job
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Good work.
Nice rhyme scheme.
Someone great once said - success is getting up one more time than you have fallen down. -
3 Stars Minimum
I do like it..awesome write. I like the rhyme scheme..really effective. Keep up the good writes! *smile*
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