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Kristofer

The keeper of Time has watched us grow
From friends, potential lovers, to people who barley know each other
He lets the time tick away from us
Slowly pushing us apart, yet we fight it
We push towards each other through the havoc
And swim through the depth of pain

I know time has changed us both,
It seems I haven't had the time for you
But my dear, I just must let you know how I care
For you will be missed immensely
Turning into nothing more than a face behind the walls of technology
But I shall fight it
Your face I will see more, for I know I will miss it
I'll miss you, your quips, you face lighting up

I hope you find a good lover
One who will treat you with the kindness you've treated me
Someone who will caress your body, as it should be
And someone who will hold your heart in the palm of their hand
Where yours should have lain in mine
But it never was so

I love you my dear,
More than you could ever know, more than you could ever understand
Just know while I wasn't there for you
When I couldn't dry your tears, couldn't hold you close
When your hand was left alone, untouched by my own
That my spirit was there with you
As it will be now
I hope you'll hold me close to you,
As close as I've held you - even through the boundaries.

I love yah Kris, and I'm gonna miss you!

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Written September 2nd, 2004

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  • poetry within
    September 12, 2004
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    very beautiful! it's an amzing trubute to your friend,seems as though he is very specail to you and you will miss him dearly,i love how you wish him happines and love,that so heartfelt and sincere,you seem like a very wonderful friend whom wants to see her friend find all the happiness they so deserve. this poem was so eautiful and emotional as well and straight form the heart as if you opened you heart up and let the words spill out onto the screen. bravo on being an awesome friend and poet!