When I see you smile it brightens
up my day.
When you pay attention to me,
everything around fades away.
I can't explain these feelings
that I have for you today.
I don't know whether to love you
or to run away.
Each time I see you, I don't
know what to think about you.
I wonder if you are as confused
about me as I am about you.
But, I do know one thing, your
smile brightens up my day.
Yvonne J. Griffin
06/26/02
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Written June 26th, 2002
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very heartfelt
& prettily composed
~enjoyed reading this... -
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**smiles*** that brightend up my day :) -
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Such a sweet, tender write!! A smile really can brighten one's day :)) -
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Nothing better than a smile to brighten someone's day...Beautiful!
That is why I am called 'Smiling Eyes' because I always have a smile on my face, just to make someone else's day!!!
*Gayla* -
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very nice. Its great to have someone like this. -
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I think people often forget how much magic a smile can do in the life of someone else...just reading about this one made me smile too! -
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What a smile that must be! good luck -
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Great use of repetition here, smiley... Poets can take a smile and knit it into the page, word by word, lines across and down--and the result is evident in this... -
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What a beautiful write, fills the morning air with light and hope. Wonnderful write. :0) -
thank you Goz, your comments mean a lot to me. :)
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sweet write :) smiles do so much!!
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